Fiction Friday: [The Red Reign]

[This week's Fiction Friday was a prompt from Scene Stealers.  Scene Stealers is a fun writing prompt exercise from Write to Done. They provide the first two sentences (or in this case sentence and a half) to be used as written, a specific writing exercise, and it can't be longer than 350 words. As you will see, my piece was too long to submit this time around. Click the link above if you want to give it a try. In the meantime...enjoy!]

She looked down on the village that had been her home until she was eighteen years old. Anna was so sure she’d never return, but he had other plans. 

It was now over a year since she’d ripped herself from his clutches, but details of the arduous journey clung to her memory like moss on a stone. The icy whip of the wind against her cheeks. Her calloused hands rubbing against the raw leather of her gloves. She doubted her decision many times along the way and worried she would become a perfectly preserved statue of ice hidden for centuries under a snow drift.  

But she eventually made it to America and then found herself plodding east. It wasn’t until Anna reached New York City that she found her new home. A place where she wasn’t gawked at because of her height or her ears. She settled into a data entry job that felt glamorous compared to the life she had escaped. During the holidays she picked up additional work and was doing quite well for herself. She had friends and fun and not long after escaping her horrific past, she found love. 

After a long day at work, coming home to Pete’s beaming smile and waiting arms was the highlight of her day. But yesterday, a turn of the key and crack of the door revealed only street lamps illuminating the apartment.  

Clicking on the lights, her eyes drew immediately to the blood red envelope propped up against the fruit bowl on the kitchen counter. The sound of her purse and keys hitting the floor muffled under the whoosh of blood rushing to her ears. Every beat of her heart throbbed in her fingertips as she reached for it with quivering hands. The note was handwritten and full of sharp angles. Every line of it turned Anna’s fear into anger.

 Dear Anna,
What a bad girl you have been. Do you not recall the extent of my powers? There is no place on earth where you can hide from me, my dear. And now you have given me no choice but to teach you a lesson. Unfortunately for your Pete, it will be a lesson that he must endure also. I will put him to work in your place until your return. Hurry along dear because, as you know, mere humans do not possess the stamina and fortitude necessary to handle the workload at this time of the year. If you truly love this man, I have no doubt that I shall see you soon.
Love,
K.K.
 

The journey back was much quicker and this time she had no doubt she would make it. For Pete’s sake, she had to. As she looked down onto Santa’s Village, her pointed ears twitched at the sounds that had fueled her nightmares. The sound of strained backs and fingers rubbed raw. Of crying babies left unattended while their mothers’ worked an ungodly amount of hours on the assembly lines under watchful eyes. 

Anna drew strength from their pain and the world she had seen outside of this place. A world that she was determined to gift to her fellow elves. It was time that they stopped making everyone else’s dream come true and realized they could make their own.  

It was time to bring the big man down. 

Scene Stealers #16

I was a little hesitant. A little nervous. But I finally did it.

After watching others publicly participate in writing prompt exercises I have finally taken the leap myself! I was always amazed at how willingly the writers put themselves out there and admittedly a little jealous.

Not anymore!

Write to Done has their own version of writing prompt exercises called Scene Stealers. They provide the first two lines of the work and limit you to 350 words. The rest is up to you!

I wasn't having a very good day with my novel so I decided to take a break. I figured that I would just see how it goes. Well, within 10 minutes I had written and posted my entry onto the site.

And yes, I posted it quickly as to not lose my nerve.

Anyhow here are the starting lines that we were given:

He pushed the door open and went in. It was the last thing he expected.

Following is what I came up with:


He pushed the door open and went in. It was the last thing he expected. The room was filled with rolling racks laden with sparkly gowns and women’s lingerie. Stiletto heels lined the walls. To his left was a table full of accessories and makeup.

“Behind that door is my payback,” she had said.

He had smirked at her knowing that there was nothing she would be able to think of that he couldn’t handle. After all at this school he was king and she was nothing.

Sure, Principal Jones took her stupid side in this whole thing, but he knew deep down that she was only doing it to seem politically correct. She knew as much as he did, hell as much as everyone did that Darlene was a total lesbian. So what was the big deal about using a Sharpie on her locker to advertise it? Gay pride, right?

“Darlene gets to choose your punishment.” Principal Jones had said and he was relieved. So much so that he gave Darlene a wink as he exited the office.

He was annoyed that she waited so long to come up with her payback. Even more annoyed that she waited until the day of prom. He was anxious to get it over with so he could start getting ready. He was a lock for Prom King and having the head cheerleader on his arm only bolstered his excitement.

Slowly the realization started to hit him and all of the excitement began to melt away.

He had waited anxiously for a prom that he would never forget and it seemed that Darlene was going to make his dream come true.


All I knew going in was that I wanted a male character to walk into a room full of women's clothing.  I honestly had no idea where the story was going to go, but I like where it ended up. Are there things that make me wish I would have spent more than 10 minutes on it? Of course, but it doesn't diminish the pride I have in taking a tangible first step in putting myself out there.

The variety in how others treated the lines is pretty amazing. You can check out the other entries or join in on the fun here.  [Scroll down to the comments section].

Do you participate in writing prompt exercises? Am I the only one out there scared to put myself out there? Comment below!